Dec

04

How can i say this sentence in a better way?

mit2093 asked:


My love of learning can flourish in Virginia Tech’s atmosphere, a university which clearly embraces academic excellence and personal development.

Higher Education (University +)

  1. 4 Responses to “How can i say this sentence in a better way?”

  2. Too damn jargony. Ick.

    Because of my love for learning, I feel I can thrive in a university such as Virginia Tech thanks to its academic excellence and potential for me to grow as an individual.

    By Kim K on Dec 6, 2008

  3. May I take a chance at it?

    Virginia Tech is a university whose atmosphere embraces academic excellence, personal development, and an encouragement of my love of learning.

    Just simplifying a bit.

    By Brother Jonathan on Dec 8, 2008

  4. I’ve loved learning from a young age, and I believe that the atmosphere at Virginia Tech can help me develop into a successful adult in the future.

    It’s not that great, just rewording what you said. Your first sentence doesn’t sound bad, but I dont have much experience with this stuff. Good luck.

    By Carrie M on Dec 10, 2008

  5. Virginia Tech is a university which clearly embraces academic excellence and personal development, which is why I believe My love of learning can flourish in it’s atmosphere.

    By Arthur W on Dec 10, 2008

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